A few comments without going in to massive detail:

page 3 -
Not a good idea to keep catalyst in the applications folder amongst everything else.
Better to be in its own sub-folder - then it is easier to find all the settings files that go with your show.

- should include part about selecting number of layers in preferences - sometimes 32 layers and mixes gets a bit confused.

- page 11 - should mention about mixes... not all shows run with full screen...

- page 13 - credit to SNP for the text thanks... straight out of one of my emails - not from any official catalyst manual...

good start... many have tried and given up!!..
needs a bit more detail...

Simon